Invisible Girl
Story by Joss Whedon. Teleplay by Ashley Gable and Thomas A. Swyden.
Directed by Reza Badiyi

Original Airdate: May 19, 1997

Plot: Marcie, an unpopular and virutally unnoticed student at Sunnydale High, vanishes quite literally (she becomes invisible). She blames Cordelia for her vanishing from sight and sets out to ruin Cordy's life. In desparation, Cordy is forced to turn to Buffy and the rest of the Scooby gang for help...

Review

Warning: If you'd rather keep SPOILER information out of sight, out of mind, turn back now. There are major SPOILERS just ahead and no amount of ignoring them will make them invisible.

In short: Hit and miss.

In some ways, it's hard to sum up exactly how I feel about Invisible Girl. Namely because on paper it sounds exactly like the type of thing Buffy does best--take an established horror myth and give it a new and interesting spin. And the fact that Marcie disappeared precisely because nobody ever saw her when she was visible was certainly an interesting idea. However, like many episodes of Sliders, I found myself coming away from the episode thinking, "Great idea but not as well executed as it could have been."
I guess I was just expecting a bit more. Part of it may be that last week's Monday showing of Nightmares was so darn good. And knowing that Tuesday night we'd see the instant classic School Hard again. Couple with it my own excitement at finally being able to see Prophecy Girl next week and it's easy to see Invsible Girl as an episode that's content to circle the runway as we get ready for the really big stuff that's coming. (And there are hints of it here!)
But, that would be an injustice to the show because I'd overlook some of the best character development we've seen Cordy given up to this point. For the first time in the first season, Cordy goes beyond being the shallow, self-serving witch we've come to know and love. Indeed, at first, it was very hard for me to find any redeeming quality to Cordy, but in the light in Invisible Girl, it's nice to see that she actually does have a human side underneath her bluster and insults. The scenes with Buffy as they discussed how hard Cordy works to be popular while it doesn't seem to bring her the happiness she thinks it should were extremely well done. Cordy was shown as glaring opposites in the story--mainly by the flashbacks. Her plotting to steal her new boyfriend as well as stealing Marcie's comment about the toupee looking like cabbage show her in an all around negative light. (Part of this is probably due to the fact that these are flashbacks from Marcie's perspective and thus would portray Cordy as less than ideal, but a portion of them do show how cold Cordy can be). Coupled with the scenes with Buffy, we see a new side of Cordy and that her ego is a front. I think we saw the real Cordy in the moments when she's the most scared--both in the closet changing and at the Bronze. (And does anyone else find it ironic that she would change clothes in the janitor's closet, where she will later spend long periods of time making out with Xander? Just a little aside!) Charisa Carpenter gives Cordy a new level of depth, that quite frankly at this point Cordy needs. Yes, we saw her great fears last week of bad hair days and chess club, but I think this week we saw a greater fear--that someone would find a chink in her armor and determine she's not all she pretends to be. Or becoming like Marcy--unseen.
So, if I were to quickly dismiss the story as filler material until Prophecy Girl, it'd be easy to overlook that plotline and some major growth.
But, when it all came down to it, the plot of a girl who turns invisible had so much more potential than it eventually turned out to deliver. I'm not sure what I expected really, but I was hoping for a bit more than we got here. I think part of it was that in the last twenty or so minutes that the plot descended into a ton of cliches instead of rising above them as Buffy usually does. Buffy is separated from the Scooby gang, knocked out, and threatened. I think there were some major, major plotholes in the final few moments, a few of which really bugged me.
One was that Angel served absolutely no purpose to this episode. It seemed as though they just threw him in at the last moment in order to have foreshadowing for next week and because they couldn't think of anyone else to get the Scooby gang out of the gas filled basement. The explanation of "Oh, I just happened to come by as you're desprate for my help," just really didn't hold water for me. Not that Angel can't be a savior, but I think having it be less cliched would have worked.
Add to that the internal illogic in the final minutes. Somehow Marcie is able to virutally simulataneously lock Giles, Xander, and Willow in the basement, then haul it up to the bandroom, get into the duct work,and kidnap Cordy. Did she also gain super speed along with her invisibility? Because that's pretty much the best explanation I can come up with when it comes to this part of the plot?
Finally, why take Buffy with her? OK< I know it's the standard evil villain clichhe to knock out the hero and then tie him/her up and explain the entire diabolical plan to him/her, but surely Marcie had more sense than that. She's had all this time to come up with her revenge plan against Cordy and she wants it to go perfectly. But yet, she takes Buffy along, knowing that Buffy regularily slays vamps and such. (Marcies tells us as much with her dialogue). So, why take Buffy who could, quite obviously, foil your plans easily? It doesn't make much sense.
So, while the idea was good, the Cordy development even better, the entire episode was a let down. I'm not disguisted, just disappointed.
Well, that about wraps it up except for a few small things....
--Did anyone else think that Marcie's plan to disfigure Cordy was similar to what Wesley wanted to do the Count in the Princess Bride? I found that an amusing little nod.
--Dialogue to rewind for: Cordy's interpretation of Shylock's speech was great!
--Dialogue to fast foward past: "It's not like I need the oxygen." Ugh!
--Is this the first time we've seen Principal Snyder or does he appear in the Puppet Show? I was just wondering.
Well, that's about it for now. All in all, it was a great concept on paper that never really went over that well on screen. I am willing to give a few extra points for Cordy's character development, though.

Rating: 6.0 (out of 10.0)

Next up: On Tuesday, a classic with the first appearance of Spike and Dru. Set those VCRs now! On Monday, the season finale of season one wiht Buffy and the Master going mano a mano in a battle to the death. Once again, set those VCRs now!

"Then why do you work so hard at being popular?"

--Buffy
Review Copyright 1998 by Michael T. Hickerson. All Rights Reserved.

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